good

i agree with what neksreaper said.
intro might be a little too long.
i'd start fading the drums and bass in right around when you finish the filter sweep.
has potential!

i like it

simple, direct.
only thing i would have done differently is maybe add the next lowest octave to your string melody. kinda fatten it up a bit.
sounds great though. :)

i like it.

i like it. but i don't need to be told the name of the song 47 times.
it diverts attention away from the melody which is raunchy, simple and awesome.
other than that, great stuff!